I received my Tutor Feedback on Assignment one last night. It came in two parts; an annotated version of my work (here) which made it much easier to relate the notes to my own work, and a general comments feedback form (here) which contained more general comments.
I am arranging a convenient time/date to have a phone tutorial with my Tutor to discuss everything in more detail. Meantime, I am going to work on the research suggested by my tutor – namely:
J.P. Sartre – “existence precedes essence” – Existentialism in general
Pooke, Grant and Newall, Diana. (2008), Art History: the basics, London: Routledge
Howells, R. & Negreiros, J. (2012), Visual Culture. 2nd Edition, Cambridge: Polity
I plan to re-construct my essay based on my research, the feedback in my Tutor notes and the tutorial over the phone. Once it is done, I will upload it in a separate post. Areas that need work are:
Develop a single point perspective and why – I need to ask my Tutor to explain this more fully during the Tutorial.
Defining terms at the start of a paper
Referencing (in my own opinion) – should I have larger bibliographies for assignments? Am I referencing enough?
I was delighted to read that I have made a strong start to the unit. I am really enjoying this course and the different depths and categories of research that it brings me to; philosophy might be new favourite subject!
Overall, I am looking forward to the tutorial and have already started Part 2.
Look at the painting The Innocent Eye Test by Mark Tansey (below). The phrase ‘the innocence of the eye’ was coined by the British critic John Ruskin in 1857:
The whole technical power o painting depends on our recovery of what may be called the innocence of the eye; that is to say, a sort of childish perception of these flat stains of colour, merely as such, without consciousness of what they signify, as a blind man would see them if suddenly gifted with sight.
Consider what Ruskin is saying and give an interpretation of Tansey’s painting in light of this.
The Innocent Eye Test, Mark Tansey, 1981
When Ruskin wrote his piece on The Elements of Drawing in 1858, he was
really pushing back against the grain of art teaching at that time. He mentions
at the start of the series that he wishes to provide an alternative to the
teaching practices which were popular at the time. The goal, it seemed to him,
was to train students to emulate the
work of “second-rate artists” or to further the rapid manufacture of designs (Ruskin, 1858, pp. 9, 10) . The idea of the
“innocence of the eye” came from his insistence that the aim of teaching was
not to reproduce other artists work, but to reproduce colours and shades as
they appear to the eye – without the interference of the artists experience; innocent
as a child or a blind man; thereby creating a unique and realistic piece.
The paragraph discussing the innocence of
the eye begins with a philosophical statement which reads “the perception of
solid form is entirely a matter of experience”. This theory that reality is
constructed by our perception of our environment is discussed, many years
later, by John R. Searle in The
Construction of Social Reality. While there are over 100 years of thought
between these two authors, similar and contrasting ideas about reality are
discussed throughout both volumes.
Ruskin compares the required ability of a
true artist to be similar to those of an infant, or a blind person who has just
gained sight; where the world around them consists entirely of various shades
of colour. Ruskin states very clearly that “the whole art of Painting consists
merely in perceiving the shape and depth of [..] patches of colour, and putting
patches of the same size depth and shape on canvas” (Ruskin, 1858, p. 23). In this way, Ruskin
is stating that the world consists of intrinsic shapes, colours, physical composition,
chemical composition. Searle also discusses this in The Construction of Social Reality, where he explains that intrinsic
features of physical objects exist without the need for the attitude or need of
an observer; a stone is a physical object whether one had ever known it to be a
stone or not. Searle goes on to explain that “when we begin to specify further
features that we might call intrinsic
to nature and those features that exist relative
to the intentionality of observers” (Searle, 1995, p. 9). Ruskin would,
in my opinion, insist that a true Artist will paint the world exactly as he
sees it at an intrinsic level, without the interference of the intentionality
of the artist as an observer. This is what he meant when he described the “innocence
of the eye”.
Interpretation of Tansey’s painting in
light of this
Taking this into consideration, I think
that Tansey’s painting is quite tongue-in-cheek. The painting itself is done in
monochrome, rather than colour, which feels like an educational diagram rather
than an aesthetic work of art. Within the painting itself we see men with
clipboards and laboratory-like clothing, taking notes. We see that the men are looking
at the cow, not at the painting. They have unveiled the painting from behind a
curtain which now lies on the floor. The painting and the cow are within a
museum or gallery setting, not outdoors which would be the natural environment
for a cow. The painting of the straw bale in the background is, perhaps, there
to encourage the cow to feel more comfortable – although the gilded frame would
immediately remove that possibility.
The painting suggests to me that the men – representing
perhaps the Institute of Art itself – are relying on the opinion, the reaction,
of this cow to determine…what? Should the cow recognise this work of art, would
that make the art realistic and therefore worthy of being made in the “innocent
eye”? Is Tansey suggesting that the Institution of Art is relying on antiquated
methods of judgement to ascribe the title of “Art” to a candidate work? Or,
even more provocatively, is Tansey equating the Institute of Art to the cow itself?
Danto wrote that art is “any artefact…which has had conferred upon it the
status of candidate for appreciation by some person or persons acting on behalf
of a certain social institution (the art world)” (Freeland, 2001, pp. 37, 38).
It is difficult to tell from the painting
what the cow’s opinion of the painting is. She does appear to be looking at it,
but there is no indication of her approval or not. This is not particularly
surprising, when to take Searle’s work into account, it would seem that observers
(presumably there is no discrimination against bovine observers) will not view
the painting with an “innocent eye” but with all of their relational, intentional,
historical observations categorising it as a “something”. Therefore, for the cow
to see these marks on the canvas and relate them to her previous experience of
other cows in nature, she would need to possess the cognitive ability to do so.
I do not know a lot about cows, but perhaps this is not possible, particularly
when the painting is placed in such an unsuitable environment.
I find myself returning again and again to
the “test” word in the title. What is the test? What would be considered a
pass? What are they testing for? My conclusion, time and again, is that these
official-looking men are basing the worth of a piece – not yet framed,
therefore not yet “deemed worthy” – on the reactions of an incompetent jury. I
feel that this can only be a criticism of the Art World, of the religiosity of “works
of art” and Museums, of the world of art criticism itself.
References:
Bibliography
Freeland, C.,
2001. Art Theory A Very Short Introduction. Oxford: Oxford University
Press.
Ruskin, J., 1858. The Elements of Drawing in Three
letters to Beginners. New York: Wiley & Halsted.
Searle, J. R., 1995. The Construction of Social Reality. The Free Press ed. New York: Simon & Schuster.
PART B
What are the implications of saying perspective was invented, and what are the implications of saying it was discovered. Assess these two possibilities and give reasons for the one you believe is correct.
Make a list of things you know to be invented and things you know to be discovered. Consider what distinguishes them and where perspective is best placed. Try to be attentive to counter arguements.
Saying that perspective was either invented
or discovered is subjective to the type of perspective you are discussing. The
definition of perspective is two-fold; either the interpretation of the world
as 3D where shapes and environments have physical depth, or the perspective of
one’s attitudes towards, or way of seeing something. Both could be applicable
to this question, considering the course that we are taking.
Saying that perspective in painting – the creation
of depth, of 3D appearance – is discovered means that at some point it existed
but had not been recognised or had not existed at all. A quick internet search on
the topic brought me to a painting which is considered to have been the “first”
painting to use Linear Perspective by Fillipo Brunelleshi in 1415 (see below).
What strikes me as uncomfortable about the description of perspective as being
discovered, is that perspective has always been part of human daily life. If perspective
was only “discovered” at some point, it would mean that the artist suddenly
realised that the world is three dimensional, and then decided he should
include this important information in his work. That doesn’t sit right with me.
Physical interpretation of perspective,
depth, in our day to day lives; our observations as users of our environment, must
be considered to have been discovered. Persepctive, in this manner, is
something that every person discovers in childhood and learns to understand as
an intrinsic part of their world. Items have depth; they take up space. An
artist would be aware of this, and constantly attempt to include this detail in
his work. Why then, did linear perspective only ‘appear’ in Brunelleshi’s picture,
in 1415? “Discovered” is the wrong term, I think.
Perspective as invented makes more sense to
me. It strikes me that since the artists before 1415 were naturally aware that
the world is three dimensional, then they simply had not discovered a way to
portray this in their work. Perspective is difficult, even for those of us well
practiced in art creation, and it is not surprising that this technique was not
just naturally available to all artists since the dawn of time. Perspective had
to be understood to be re-created. And the invention of perspective, as a
technique in art, would seem to me more likely.
If one considered “perspective” to mean how
we see things, which I think is more likely given the course, the conversation
is quite different.
Perspective as ones way of seeing, is
invented in so far as we base our perceptions of the world on our experiences.
One could experience grass for example, in a positive or negative manner,
depending on experience. However, our perspective is also discovered in that it
can be reflected upon in order to determine what values our perspective holds.
One can discover that ones perspective on something is faulty, or incorrect in
some way. Our perspective is also both invented and discovered when we talk
about our perspective of art, in that some institutions create – invent – an experience
of art in a particular way, to control our perspective of the art. For example,
placing a piece of art behind special glass, in a room of it’s own, under
special lighting, all creates a religious perspective for the viewer.
However, we can also now come to perspective
on art by discovery in today’s world because of the internet. Our constant
connectivity and the never ending database of works – without any context –
means that our perspective of different art is discovered differently each time
we view it in a different context. I found John Berger’s BBC series on Ways of Seeing (Ways of Seeing, 1972) to be very informative
on the subjects of perspective, observation and the construction of the reality
we live in. I have not quoted directly from the series, but the series itself
informed my thoughts on this piece.
Things I know to be invented:
Money – does not exist naturally in the
world without human involvement, was invented as a way to keep track of debts
between people and to enshrine value on possessions.
Cameras – camera’s were invented by a human
being in order to capture the visual experience of a moment and reproduce it.
Telephone – the telephone was invented to
fulfil a human need to communicate with other humans despite distance.
Things I know to be discovered:
Various animals – animals existed in the
world outside of human observation or categorisation, they exist intrinsically
in their own right. Their discovery relates to the human observation and
therefore categorisation of them, as they were found in nature.
Fire – fire exists without human
observation. It exists in a physical sense whether we agree it does or not.
Stars / Planets – stars and planets existed
before our observation of them – although their discovery was really only
possible after the invention of the telescope.
References
Ways of Seeing. 1972. [Film]
Directed by John Berger. UK: BBC.
This is a learning log for my study with OCA – I have just started a BA in Fine Arts via distance learning.
To say I am excited is an understatement.
Having enrolled a week ago, so far I have received my Study Pack in the post which looks very impressive and just a little bit intimidating.
My very first course is Understanding Visual Culture. I have just started to read as far as assignment one and while it is a little bit confusing, it seems like something I may have worked with before but in a different context. Two years ago, I completed a certificate course in psychotherapy and counselling and I believe we came across at least the first concept during that time; the concept that some “things” are only “things” because human beings have collectively agreed, or assigned, them meaning.
For example, language. Who decides that when someone says the word “cat”, we mean this small, four-legged furry creature with sharp claws and distinctive eyes? The “collective conscious” is something that really interested me during my counselling course, and I believe that this first assignment in UVC relates to that in some way. The idea that human beings, across generations and spans of time, are connected by our collective acceptance of, and development of, different meanings and descriptions, fascinates me.
How does this affect us on a daily basis? Well really, what isn’t affected by it? Our day to day lives are built around rules and beliefs that stem from a collective agreement that some actions are “moral” and “good” and some actions are not. Holding a job, being faithful to one person in your relationship, laws, trading time for money (which is really just numbers on a screen, for many of us nowadays), an items worth in terms of the money that we all use etc.
Just using this blog to gather my thoughts about assignment one has been very useful; particularly when it comes to the question of why John Searle used inverted commas around the word objective. I think that it comes from the double meaning of objective in this case. The definition of objective, from the Cambridge Dictionary is “based on real facts and not influenced by personal beliefs or feelings:” but while discussing things which are not actually fact but are based on our collective agreement of their meaning, then these items are not actually objective because they are based on beliefs and feelings, they just happen to be based on the beliefs and feelings of the collective, rather than the individual.
I will post more about this in my assignment 1 post.