Tutor Feedback – Assignment One, Pre-tutorial

I received my Tutor Feedback on Assignment one last night. It came in two parts; an annotated version of my work (here) which made it much easier to relate the notes to my own work, and a general comments feedback form (here) which contained more general comments.

I am arranging a convenient time/date to have a phone tutorial with my Tutor to discuss everything in more detail. Meantime, I am going to work on the research suggested by my tutor – namely:

  • J.P. Sartre – “existence precedes essence” – Existentialism in general
  • Pooke, Grant and Newall, Diana. (2008), Art History: the basics, London: Routledge
  • Howells, R. & Negreiros, J. (2012), Visual Culture. 2nd Edition, Cambridge: Polity

I plan to re-construct my essay based on my research, the feedback in my Tutor notes and the tutorial over the phone. Once it is done, I will upload it in a separate post. Areas that need work are:

  • Develop a single point perspective and why – I need to ask my Tutor to explain this more fully during the Tutorial.
  • Defining terms at the start of a paper
  • Referencing (in my own opinion) – should I have larger bibliographies for assignments? Am I referencing enough?

I was delighted to read that I have made a strong start to the unit. I am really enjoying this course and the different depths and categories of research that it brings me to; philosophy might be new favourite subject!

Overall, I am looking forward to the tutorial and have already started Part 2.

Self-Assessment based on the Assessment Criteria

Understanding Visual Culture: Part One

Self-Assessment based on the Assessment Criteria

I am writing this piece very quickly before I start to review my Tutor feedback on Assignment One.

Demonstration of subject based knowledge and understanding

I think that I have demonstrated that I am trying to develop a subject based knowledge. Prior to starting this course, I had absolutely no exposure to Visual Culture, art history or theory, or Philosophy. I have been reading, listening and watching as much as I can in relation to the subject. Do I think I have demonstrated subject based knowledge? Perhaps, if just in a small way. I believe that this will develop over the next parts of the course.

Demonstration of research skills

Research feels like all I am doing at the moment! I am enjoying it. I believe that I have demonstrated some research skills by my referencing and by my learning log, however in reality I am doing much more “work” than I am recording. I am going to change this starting with Part 2 – and record instantly any reading that I am doing and my thoughts around it. I think it will help me to hone my skills for referencing properly, too.

Demonstration of critical and evaluation skills

Up until Assignment One, I would have said that I didn’t know how to be critical of something, at least not academically. I think that I have gotten the hang of it now. One thing I am struggling with is structure – with laying out my thoughts in a coherent manner. I am also struggling with the feeling that criticism and evaluation can go on forever, that there is no real “answer” to anything, just constant criticism and defence and recreation.

Communication

Communication is generally a strength of mine. I think that my communication skills have struggled slightly because of my lack of subject knowledge, but the skill is still there. I think that my communication will improve when I start to record more frequently what I am reading. I also need to work on my thought process and how to translate that into coherent communication.

Part 1 – Assignment 1

PART A

Look at the painting The Innocent Eye Test by Mark Tansey (below). The phrase ‘the innocence of the eye’ was coined by the British critic John Ruskin in 1857:

The whole technical power o painting depends on our recovery of what may be called the innocence of the eye; that is to say, a sort of childish perception of these flat stains of colour, merely as such, without consciousness of what they signify, as a blind man would see them if suddenly gifted with sight.

Consider what Ruskin is saying and give an interpretation of Tansey’s painting in light of this.

The Innocent Eye Test, Mark Tansey, 1981

When Ruskin wrote his piece on The Elements of Drawing in 1858, he was really pushing back against the grain of art teaching at that time. He mentions at the start of the series that he wishes to provide an alternative to the teaching practices which were popular at the time. The goal, it seemed to him, was to train students to emulate the work of “second-rate artists” or to further the rapid manufacture of designs (Ruskin, 1858, pp. 9, 10) . The idea of the “innocence of the eye” came from his insistence that the aim of teaching was not to reproduce other artists work, but to reproduce colours and shades as they appear to the eye – without the interference of the artists experience; innocent as a child or a blind man; thereby creating a unique and realistic piece.

The paragraph discussing the innocence of the eye begins with a philosophical statement which reads “the perception of solid form is entirely a matter of experience”. This theory that reality is constructed by our perception of our environment is discussed, many years later, by John R. Searle in The Construction of Social Reality. While there are over 100 years of thought between these two authors, similar and contrasting ideas about reality are discussed throughout both volumes.

Ruskin compares the required ability of a true artist to be similar to those of an infant, or a blind person who has just gained sight; where the world around them consists entirely of various shades of colour. Ruskin states very clearly that “the whole art of Painting consists merely in perceiving the shape and depth of [..] patches of colour, and putting patches of the same size depth and shape on canvas” (Ruskin, 1858, p. 23). In this way, Ruskin is stating that the world consists of intrinsic shapes, colours, physical composition, chemical composition. Searle also discusses this in The Construction of Social Reality, where he explains that intrinsic features of physical objects exist without the need for the attitude or need of an observer; a stone is a physical object whether one had ever known it to be a stone or not. Searle goes on to explain that “when we begin to specify further features that we might call intrinsic to nature and those features that exist relative to the intentionality of observers” (Searle, 1995, p. 9). Ruskin would, in my opinion, insist that a true Artist will paint the world exactly as he sees it at an intrinsic level, without the interference of the intentionality of the artist as an observer. This is what he meant when he described the “innocence of the eye”.

Interpretation of Tansey’s painting in light of this

Taking this into consideration, I think that Tansey’s painting is quite tongue-in-cheek. The painting itself is done in monochrome, rather than colour, which feels like an educational diagram rather than an aesthetic work of art. Within the painting itself we see men with clipboards and laboratory-like clothing, taking notes. We see that the men are looking at the cow, not at the painting. They have unveiled the painting from behind a curtain which now lies on the floor. The painting and the cow are within a museum or gallery setting, not outdoors which would be the natural environment for a cow. The painting of the straw bale in the background is, perhaps, there to encourage the cow to feel more comfortable – although the gilded frame would immediately remove that possibility.

The painting suggests to me that the men – representing perhaps the Institute of Art itself – are relying on the opinion, the reaction, of this cow to determine…what? Should the cow recognise this work of art, would that make the art realistic and therefore worthy of being made in the “innocent eye”? Is Tansey suggesting that the Institution of Art is relying on antiquated methods of judgement to ascribe the title of “Art” to a candidate work? Or, even more provocatively, is Tansey equating the Institute of Art to the cow itself? Danto wrote that art is “any artefact…which has had conferred upon it the status of candidate for appreciation by some person or persons acting on behalf of a certain social institution (the art world)” (Freeland, 2001, pp. 37, 38).

It is difficult to tell from the painting what the cow’s opinion of the painting is. She does appear to be looking at it, but there is no indication of her approval or not. This is not particularly surprising, when to take Searle’s work into account, it would seem that observers (presumably there is no discrimination against bovine observers) will not view the painting with an “innocent eye” but with all of their relational, intentional, historical observations categorising it as a “something”. Therefore, for the cow to see these marks on the canvas and relate them to her previous experience of other cows in nature, she would need to possess the cognitive ability to do so. I do not know a lot about cows, but perhaps this is not possible, particularly when the painting is placed in such an unsuitable environment.

I find myself returning again and again to the “test” word in the title. What is the test? What would be considered a pass? What are they testing for? My conclusion, time and again, is that these official-looking men are basing the worth of a piece – not yet framed, therefore not yet “deemed worthy” – on the reactions of an incompetent jury. I feel that this can only be a criticism of the Art World, of the religiosity of “works of art” and Museums, of the world of art criticism itself.

References:

Bibliography

Freeland, C., 2001. Art Theory A Very Short Introduction. Oxford: Oxford University Press.

Ruskin, J., 1858. The Elements of Drawing in Three letters to Beginners. New York: Wiley & Halsted.

Searle, J. R., 1995. The Construction of Social Reality. The Free Press ed. New York: Simon & Schuster.

PART B

What are the implications of saying perspective was invented, and what are the implications of saying it was discovered. Assess these two possibilities and give reasons for the one you believe is correct.

Make a list of things you know to be invented and things you know to be discovered. Consider what distinguishes them and where perspective is best placed. Try to be attentive to counter arguements.

Saying that perspective was either invented or discovered is subjective to the type of perspective you are discussing. The definition of perspective is two-fold; either the interpretation of the world as 3D where shapes and environments have physical depth, or the perspective of one’s attitudes towards, or way of seeing something. Both could be applicable to this question, considering the course that we are taking.

Saying that perspective in painting – the creation of depth, of 3D appearance – is discovered means that at some point it existed but had not been recognised or had not existed at all. A quick internet search on the topic brought me to a painting which is considered to have been the “first” painting to use Linear Perspective by Fillipo Brunelleshi in 1415 (see below). What strikes me as uncomfortable about the description of perspective as being discovered, is that perspective has always been part of human daily life. If perspective was only “discovered” at some point, it would mean that the artist suddenly realised that the world is three dimensional, and then decided he should include this important information in his work. That doesn’t sit right with me.  

Physical interpretation of perspective, depth, in our day to day lives; our observations as users of our environment, must be considered to have been discovered. Persepctive, in this manner, is something that every person discovers in childhood and learns to understand as an intrinsic part of their world. Items have depth; they take up space. An artist would be aware of this, and constantly attempt to include this detail in his work. Why then, did linear perspective only ‘appear’ in Brunelleshi’s picture, in 1415? “Discovered” is the wrong term, I think.

Perspective as invented makes more sense to me. It strikes me that since the artists before 1415 were naturally aware that the world is three dimensional, then they simply had not discovered a way to portray this in their work. Perspective is difficult, even for those of us well practiced in art creation, and it is not surprising that this technique was not just naturally available to all artists since the dawn of time. Perspective had to be understood to be re-created. And the invention of perspective, as a technique in art, would seem to me more likely.

If one considered “perspective” to mean how we see things, which I think is more likely given the course, the conversation is quite different.

Perspective as ones way of seeing, is invented in so far as we base our perceptions of the world on our experiences. One could experience grass for example, in a positive or negative manner, depending on experience. However, our perspective is also discovered in that it can be reflected upon in order to determine what values our perspective holds. One can discover that ones perspective on something is faulty, or incorrect in some way. Our perspective is also both invented and discovered when we talk about our perspective of art, in that some institutions create – invent – an experience of art in a particular way, to control our perspective of the art. For example, placing a piece of art behind special glass, in a room of it’s own, under special lighting, all creates a religious perspective for the viewer.

However, we can also now come to perspective on art by discovery in today’s world because of the internet. Our constant connectivity and the never ending database of works – without any context – means that our perspective of different art is discovered differently each time we view it in a different context. I found John Berger’s BBC series on Ways of Seeing (Ways of Seeing, 1972) to be very informative on the subjects of perspective, observation and the construction of the reality we live in. I have not quoted directly from the series, but the series itself informed my thoughts on this piece.

Things I know to be invented:

Money – does not exist naturally in the world without human involvement, was invented as a way to keep track of debts between people and to enshrine value on possessions.

Cameras – camera’s were invented by a human being in order to capture the visual experience of a moment and reproduce it.

Telephone – the telephone was invented to fulfil a human need to communicate with other humans despite distance.

Things I know to be discovered:

Various animals – animals existed in the world outside of human observation or categorisation, they exist intrinsically in their own right. Their discovery relates to the human observation and therefore categorisation of them, as they were found in nature.

Fire – fire exists without human observation. It exists in a physical sense whether we agree it does or not.

Stars / Planets – stars and planets existed before our observation of them – although their discovery was really only possible after the invention of the telescope.

References

Ways of Seeing. 1972. [Film] Directed by John Berger. UK: BBC.

Exercise 1.5

Reflecting on Searle’s observation at the beginning of this chapter, how would you explain the difference between the construction of social reality and the social construction of reality?

The difference appears to me to be intent.

Social Reality as a concept is constructed – unintentionally – by how we perceive the world to be and what meaning we take from the experiences we have. I may have a very different social reality to you, but not by intent, simply by difference in perceptions. The signs or symbols that I am interpreting look the same to you as they do to me, but it is possible that they represent something very different.

When you consider the Social Construction of Reality, that refers to a more systematic, all inclusive experience, by which signs and symbols have an “agreed” definition and meaning. This is intentionally constructed through teaching, training, morals, religion etc. It is not something that we consider ourselves to have a choice in accepting or not – there are simply some things in life that “are known” and it is not our place to question these things.

Exercise 1.4

What do you understand by the phrase ‘digital art’? List the possible meanings and indicate the one that you consider most viable

This exercise follows a chapter that I had great difficulty in understanding. I think that this is where the complications of “distance learning” will arise for me; where the author appears to be following a very set train of thought, but the stop-start aspect of studying from home means that I am not always following the author’s thought and have to jump back.

My first response to the phrase ‘digital art’ is that it is computer generated. It might (but not always) be created by a person operating a computer or interface, but it is not tangible in the same way as a painting or a sculpture might be. I am restricting my idea of ‘art’ in this case to visual art as opposed to music and text, because I find that the description of ‘digital’ doesn’t correlate very often to music or writing. I have rarely, if ever, heard of a text as “digital writing” or a “digital music” composition.

Digital art is always viewed through a medium; through a screen of some sort. It may not have a context because it can be viewed in isolation. It is not tangible. It may be seen differently by different users of the screen because of differences in the type of screen or the resolution of the image. It may appear larger or smaller than it physically is.

Digital art refers to creations that are intended for visual consumption and a vast audience. It often communicates a message or a meaning, or an emotion, to the consumer such as an advert. I could almost go as far as to say that the majority of digital art is made for it’s consumption, rather than to express an emotion or meaning from the artist. In this way, it is created with the consumer in mind, rather than the artist. It may have all of the characteristics required to make a piece of art that would be acceptable as art alone, but in my opinion, the phrase digital art does not lend itself to the works of art from the past. I would be surprised to find a piece of digital art within an art museum, for example.

List all of the possible meanings – ‘digital art’

  • art that is created via software, computer, electronics and equations, intended to be viewed on a screen of some sort and intended to be seen by vast numbers of people, possibly without context or control.
  • text, advertising, for use en masse in a database, independent of the artist, anonymous
  • distant from the artist, a distance created by the interposition of the hardware and software needed to create it. It is not tangible and although it may be beautiful, I think would be naturally lacking in connection because of it’s ephemeral nature.

Which do I feel is most viable? I feel that all of my descriptions are similar – they are leading to the same feeling of not as worthy of the term ‘art’ when compared to a physical creation. I feel uncomfortable with that description myself as it feels biased and possibly unfair, but that is my experience of digital art to date.

Exercise 1.3

“In what sense could:

  1. A Dyson Vacuum Cleaner
  2. Tenniel’s illustrations of Alice in Wonderland
  3. The Nazca lines

be works of art?”

First of all, I am going to summarize all of the “criteria” for a “work of art” based on my research so far.

From my course notes, I there have been descriptions such as “beauty” and “form” and “Representation”. Additionally, in Art Theory; a Very Short Introduction I read other options such as “purposiveness without a purpose” by Kant, which says that a work of art should be beautiful to us without regard for it’s use or lack of use, or with some degree of distancing oneself from the work in order to passively admire it. Other chapters reference light, space and allergory etc.

For this exercise, I am just going to view the items individually and write my own thoughts on the matter.

Dyson Vacuum Cleaner

My first thought about the Dyson Vacuum is that the questions references the vacuum itself, not an image of the vacuum. While it was made with an intention to appear attractive – through it’s form and colours, materials and textures – it does not represent anything to me. It doesn’t make me feel that there was a deeper emotion behind it’s creation, or that it has some double meaning. It is not even that beautiful, in my opinion, to look at. What strikes me most however is that a vacuum does not satisfy Kant’s description of “purposiveness without purpose” – a vacuum is specifically made to do a job, it is something we rely on and interact with on a daily basis, it is not something to admire from a distance or contemplate from a distance. One could argue that it’s shape, it’s form and design, it’s colours and textures, it’s contemporary styling and it’s physical use – removing unwanted particles from our environment – could lead to a person accepting it as a candidate work of art. It speaks to the viewer of cleanliness, which we have heard is “next to Godliness”. It represents wealth and efficient living. It symbolises a certain status to own it. It’s form is sleek and modern, it’s contemporary design makes it attractive to keep within our homes where it can be viewed and admired daily. It represents a societal “norm” of keeping a house tidy. It also speaks to me of femininity – it’s design is so sleek and small, that it makes me feel it’s intended audience is women. Could it then be considered a feminist piece of art? Could it be considered to have a feminist meaning hidden deep within?

John Tenniel, Alice in Wonderland 1865

I would consider these illustrations to be works of art. They are compositionally beautiful pieces. They did have a purpose – to illustrate the story of Alice in Wonderland – but they are also art in their own right. They can be viewed without the story and still be appreciated for their form and their colours, the beauty of the child’s imagination. They can be viewed individually also, without the story, and they are still work to be admired. Are illustrations considered works of art, in the Institutional Theory of Art? I suppose that they are just as worthy to be candidates as any other candidate work you might come across. There are no exclusion criteria, as far as I have read in my research, and should enough people from “the Institution” consider and agree that they are works of art, based on their learned opinions and taste, then of course they are to be considered works of art.

I do note that I have less to discuss though, about the Illustrations, than I did about the vacuum. That is interesting. Perhaps the vacuum is a worthy candidate?

Nazca Lines, The Condor, 200 BC- 500 AD

My first impressions of the Nazca lines are that they are definitely intended to represent something. Without further research I don’t know what, or even if that has been discovered at all, but I feel that they are of almost religious significance. They are beautifully and precisely drawn. They are not anatomically correct, but they are a close impression of a bird. I also find the colouring very interesting, almost regal with golden tones and luminous lines. I suspect there was some story behind this bird, but without knowing it I can still appreciate it’s beauty and feel almost reverent towards it. I would consider it to be similar to the stained glass windows or the high naves and spires of churches, which may not tell a story straight out to people in our times, but would have meant a great deal to those who existed in the culture in which they were created – at the time of their creation. Similarly, I imagine that at the time this Condor was created, 200BC – 500AD, it was easily recognisable as a religious or culturally significant symbol. It it drawn so deliberately, clearly and precisely that it must have been created by someone who was highly skilled, perhaps highly appreciated in that society. It may not have a utilisation in physical terms, but it is absolutely meant for decoration and for interpretation.

Exercise 1.2 Theory or Not?

“Identify three works of art in which theory plays a decisive role, and three works of art in which theory seems absent. In 100- 150 words reflect on the distinction between them.”

First, I tried to establish what theories could possibly play a decisive role in art making. The list that I have found via research is:

  • Impressionism
  • Symbolism
  • Post-Impressionism
  • Art Nouveau
  • Expressionism
  • Cubism
  • Constructivism
  • Surrealism
  • Abstract Expressionism
  • Minimalism
  • Post-Minimalism
  • Photorealism
  • Feminist Art
  • Neo-expressionism

I thought it would be helpful to list them, because the information is not very forthcoming in my research. It appears that some people call these “Movements”, some call them “Theories”, some call them Genres… it is quite confusing for someone just starting out. I would have liked to find a simple textbook that explained the different names applied to these and exactly what they are and when they happened. I found a website with a lot of information, but it is difficult to navigate. The site is
https://www.theartstory.org/section_movements_timeline.htm

A very simple time-line provided by this site is below.

a timeline of “movements” or Art Theories found at
https://www.theartstory.org/section_movements_timeline.htm

The three works of art that I have chosen to identify where theory plays a decisive role are:

Edvard Munch – The Scream

Edvard Munch – The Scream 1893

This painting by Edvard Munch is a perfect example of an Expressionist Painting. Expressionism was a new painting style that was based more upon the artists feelings and emotions, rather than depictions of the external world. The work was seen to come from within the artist, rather than a representation of the visual, outside, natural world. Painted in 1893, the artist himself described the emotions behind The Scream while waling along a bridge in Oslo, where “the sky turned as red as blood. I stopped and leaned against the fence…shivering with fear. Then I heard the enormous, infinite scream of nature.” So, it is obvious in the painting that the subject is in fact on a bridge, so sin’t this painting just a representation of the outside world as seen from the bridge in Oslo? No. What makes this painting an expressionist work are the swirling, exaggerated brushstrokes, the stark, jarring colours, the anxiety expressed via the method of painting that was employed. The unusual perspective makes the work unstable, the subject’s body is incomplete and not accurate – he is more like a ghost than a human form. The horror on the face, coupled with the apparent “normalcy” of the figures behind suggests that this was a moment of sheer panic, terror within the artist, making it an expressionist painting.

Jean Metzinger – Tea Time 1911

Jean Metzinger – Tea Time 1911

I have to admit, I am not a big fan of cubism. I did some research on various works, but find that I fall on the critics side, who claim that such artists were principally concerned with distortion and abstraction, rather than creating what could be considered aesthetically pleasing. (Although, I am already criticising myself for such a thought! Why must art be aesthetically pleasing? Surely it is art if it has been accepted as such by the “Art World”? Perhaps this is an example of how the culture at the time that the work was accepted as Art Work differs from the culture in which I was born and raised.).

I have chosen Tea Time by Jean Metzinger as my example of a work of art where Cubism theory was most at work. Cubism was based on a theory that everything is composed of basic forms and shapes. That the background and the foreground are constantly in flux and that the artist was representing imagery in an objective manner which revealed more of it’s essential character. I can see how this description applies to this painting. Obviously, the shapes and jarring colour changes, the broken lines (where the tea cup is split) provide a sort of timeline; as though the painting was a memory of a series of moments during which a conversation took place. It has more life, more movement to it, than a simple portrait of a woman having tea. There is a feeling of being drawn into the moment, to being present at the table with the subject, seeing the cup lifted and placed back in a slightly different position. I can see where time and background and foreground are in constant flux. This would have to be one of my favourite images from this theory.

Paul Gauguin – The Seed of the Areoi 1892


Paul Gauguin – The Seed of the Areoi 1892

I wanted to include “Primitive Art” in this exercise, because I have just finished an incredibly interesting chapter on it in the book I am reading. The chapter discussed how “Primitive art” was originally art and/or craft by non-Western communities, who used the art to display their cultural history, to inform the future generations of their cultural heritage and for religious services. I say “art and/or craft” here because, unlike Western art which was considered to be beautiful despite not being useful, “Primitive” art often had a utilitarian use as well as being aesthetically pleasing. European artists not only became enamored with the art styles, but also influenced it’s use and effectively borrowed the techniques of these people, but without context. What originally would have held great meaning to a certain culture, for example the Nail Fetish sculptures of Africa, were often taken out of context by European artists and transported into culturally diminished environments. This meant that the work lost it’s cultural identity and became a commodity instead. I found this an emotional read – I’m not sure why. I think I felt a little sad that these cultures were almost ‘infected’ with commodity rather than their original, emotionally connected work.

Anyway, for this exercise I chose The Seed of the Areoi by Paul Gauguin. I feel that the motivation behind this painting was to exhibit a knowledge and a connection with a more primitive form of painting in which the work had simple form but allegory content. According to the Paul Gauguin website, the work was meant to express the artists idealistic image of Tahiti, before he had arrived to find it colonised by the French and plagued with poverty and disease.

Artwork where theory does NOT play a decisive role

I found this part difficult. Surely, with enough critical analysis, every art work can be said to have a theory behind it? Even work that is produced with no theory in mind to begin with, or without the language available to label the work as theory based, will eventually become part of a Theory? I have chosen some works by artists that I don’t think were intended to be theory based. I think the human desire to categorise things have since placed these works into different movements, but originally the artist was unaware of such a category.

Leonardo da Vinci
Portrait of a Man in Red Chalk  1510
Paul Cézanne Self Portrait
George Stubbs – Whistlejacket 1762

Why did I pick these images? To be honest, I found this part very difficult. I find it difficult to not find some theory or movement or style or deeper meaning in most historical artworks. I was tempted to use “Instagram Artists” – contemporary artists who are very visible on social media, but even there I became caught up in descriptions like “impressionism”, “abstract expressionism”, “minimalism” etc. So I am left with those works of art that are well known, but appear to have been based upon nothing more than the art of art making. The self-portraits I believe are quite free from styles or rules of a movement, the painting of the horse is really just a representation of the animal itself without any external context or style.

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